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Angelicious



Joined: 31 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 5:02 pm    Post subject: Critique? Reply with quote


This is a pic for one of my wild horse roleplay characters Smile Critique, please?
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SuzyQ1994



Joined: 17 Jan 2007
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 5:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think it's great the only thing i can say is on the right were it has the name(?) you may want to move it so it's not covering up he horse as much but thats mainly personal preference
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milon



Joined: 12 Feb 2007
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 5:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Actually, I like it. It's quite good, and different from my style, which makes it more appealing to me.

The only thing I suggest, next time, is maybe duplicating the head shot layer, putting it on a gaussian blur of about 7, then overlaying or soft lighting that layer on top of the original. It will highlight/contrast the horse, making it the main eye grabber. Or, else, the horse that's standing on the outskirts of the picture, doing that, or somehow adding light on him, making half his body (I'd suggest lower) in shadow, and the rest in a pool of light. If that's possible for your program.

And I like the text!~
[Though, my personal favorite is "Beyond Wonderland"]

-Kat
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Silversketches



Joined: 05 Dec 2006
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 7:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmm, I think it's just my computer, but I can't read all the text, because it's too dark. :3

Probably my computer though.

And I think the horse head is too tranparent. But that's again, probably just my computer and I.

Hehe.
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samm sammy sam sammy



Joined: 27 Oct 2007
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 7:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I love it! Is the horses' name Kiso? Hey, are you going to make more of these? cuz i tottaly want one!! Looks awesome!!
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Royal Envy



Joined: 20 Oct 2007
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 7:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Angelicious I usualy play VP and I have been a part of it for a long time...
Seeing this pic it makes me go wow =)
You have a lot of talent =)

if you wouldnt mind I would love to join the RP game could you give me a link?
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Sterling



Joined: 14 Aug 2007
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 8:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

WOW! Totally marvulous!
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