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ChocolateGal
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 Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 2:41 am Post subject: My Poems- Have you say and maybe buy some poems!! |
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Ok you might of seen my poem in Charlie1 's thread called 5 million dollars and i was wondering if you liked it? Well ive got another one for you:
Your eyes pull the deepest strings in my heart,
Your touch makes me stay wanting for more,
Your breath is soothing to the bone,
Your voice will always be the one I long for,
Your body is strong and sleek as well as calm and beautiful,
It was love at first sight...
By ChocolateGal
This could be about your hubby/wife, gf/bf, the kitty at the pet shop or the dog at the pound. This one can be for sale. You pick the price and ill say if it's reasonable. We that's 'bout it. Bid (or say) away  |
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Sterling
Joined: 14 Aug 2007
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| Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2007 8:52 am Post subject: |
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| So you like love poems? I find this poem...interesting. It really reminds me of things I'm not supossed to do.. One question...when you were writing this, what type of emotion did you want the reader to feel? 'Cause I got mixed.. |
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ChocolateGal
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| Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2007 1:46 am Post subject: |
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| well sort of mixed feelings. Like i said it could be about anything. |
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ChocolateGal
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| Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 6:56 pm Post subject: |
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Noboby wants poems *sighs*   i knew noone listened to my posts |
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PinkStar
Joined: 23 Nov 2007
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| Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 9:03 pm Post subject: |
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| I do!! One about christmas ok? |
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Queso
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| Posted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 9:36 pm Post subject: |
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| Sterling wrote: | | So you like love poems? I find this poem...interesting. It really reminds me of things I'm not supossed to do.. One question...when you were writing this, what type of emotion did you want the reader to feel? 'Cause I got mixed.. |
It made me think about my horse Winn lol. At first I thought it was about a bf/gf, but when I read the part saying they are strong and sleek and beautiful and I thought of her. When I re-red it it pretty much fit her to a T lol
Very nice, I wish I could write poetry. I kinda suck at it lol. I have a hard time putting my emotions into words I guess... |
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ChocolateGal
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| Posted: Tue Dec 18, 2007 11:57 pm Post subject: |
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| great!!! I can do a chrissie poem for you it should be done by tomorrow |
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ChocolateGal
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| Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2007 9:07 pm Post subject: |
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OK here it is:
Christmas is coming, it's a festive season of joy
Christmas is coming, Santa's on his way
Christmas is coming, with that great big toy
Christmas is coming, the suspence is thrilling
Christmas has come, Santa's come with his sack
Christmas has come, milk and cookies are waiting
Christmas has come, there are the presents for Jack
Christmas has come, to take away all our sins
There we go do you like it? |
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