I'm Way too indecisive for my own good!

[Trinity]

Okay, so I have an assignment for english where I have to write a poem. It has to be either a love poem (which I can NOT write!) or about something I really like. I have 3 that i'm trying to choose between and I was wondering if you guys would help. 2 are about rain and the other is about heavy metal music. here they are:

Gift of the sky

Delicate tears of the sky, fall on me-
Cry on me, o heaven of earth.
Let your tears embody me, let me be you-
Let me hold the cleansing holy power.

Wash away the cities, the pollution.
With your tears, take ours-let us cry no longer.
WIth your gift we will prosper,
Beneath destruction rises the phoenix again.

Fire and brimstone be banished below-
Heal our earth with warming tears,
Fight no longer fire with fire-
Fight once more our fire with water.

Blow leaves across the painful fires.
Let me once more see the night sky-
I wish to see the glowing light,
The light that has been bestowed upon stars.

Shape hearts from clouds, hand them to me
I will distribute them amongst the needy-
For the poor will never need them,
The rich will need them more often.

Once more I can hear heaven's music
Under the sky, the clear blue sky-
Remember the saving grace, the saving rain-
The gift of the sky.

The rain.

Rain

Rain,
A beauty that cannot be described,
Coming down hard or light,
It showers over me just right.

Rain,
It gently hits the roses in our field,
I truly love the rain,
It drives my insanity sane.

Rain,
Thunderstorms brighten up the dark sky with light,
It reminds me of my happiest days,
And on my bad moments, it gives me a second gaze.

Rain,
The smell, the taste, landing on my lips,
As it showers down on me,
Its drops fill each beautiful sea.

Rain,
The smell is so clean and fresh,
It soaks me when I run outside,
It?s like a fantastic ride.

Rain,
It fills me with hope and joy,
Makes all the bad moments flow from me,
And helps me, for once, run free.

Metal Magnet


Yes, I am a metal magnet

A regular head banger

Click on my lighter and hold it

To my favorite metal ballad

I love all kinds of rock and roll

From soft, medium, alternative

Nu metal and headache music

All of it rescues me from the insanity

It pops the ears of those who refuse

To acquire the taste of it

I love it! Surging my adrenaline

My blood finally pumping

Pulsing, pulsating, invigorating

Thump, thump, thump, the base screams

Like heavy footprints in the crevices within my head

Invading my dark regions of the mind

Yes, I love my metal

It caress’ the deeper aspect of me

All of a sudden I have all this energy

Head banging, screaming, lucidity gone

I love all kinds of rock and roll

From soft, medium, alternative

Nu metal and headache music

All of it rescues me from the insanity

The imagined acid trips all in my head

When the music says all it will ever say

I am at the record store preparing for the trap

Eager to play my new finds, holding the CD in my lap

Eager to rage in a positive manner

No room for me to feel diseased

For I have a natural high, a definitive rush

This headache music sets this warped mind at ease

[Cowgirls Rule]

I like the first one

[Trinity]

[Queso]

I like the first one the best too.

[Gold Hope Stable]

i also like the first one

[milon]

I love the third one XD

Maybe because that was a great escape for so long, and I just like the wording and description.

Great job on all of them though, they are ALL so nicely done.

In the end, its you who has to decide what you like the best :3

[Trinity]

thanks everyone!

[Silversketches]

I LOVE the first one.

I love the rain also, so I guess I liked it even before I read it.

XD

But all of them are amazing...

great vocabulary.

[Trinity]

thanks!