Opinion and suggestions on my art please.Updated AGAIN!

[Cowgirls Rule]

on your second example I like the claws and the paws.I'm not so sure about the rest.

[SuzyQ1994]

any one who would like to redline it go right ahead!

Thanks Leopardstorm


Oh and no one said anyhitng aobut the color of the cat is the color ok

[Cowgirls Rule]

ok I red lined it.

[milon]

I might of gone overboard, and since I know diddly about feline anatomy, I tried my best for red lining yours. Hope it helps.

First of all, I find looking at a picture is the most helpful thing in the world of art, sometimes just tracing over photos for practice is helpful. Sometimes just staring at a picture for a while is helpful, it all depends on personal preference.

Here is a great photo that shows the anatomy of your position pretty well;


Okay, and here's my red line. Pretty much I put everything that struck me as..not correct. But then again, it is all personal preference; XD



Hope it helps! And you did a great job coloring though, I'll give you that

[SuzyQ1994]

Thanks soo much Kat66 verry helpfull i'll try and do it again by hand and see what happens.

oh and thanks for commenting on the color

[milon]

No problem, glad it was helpful...I can't draw felines very well

I colord it..just to show you how I'd do it..

Hope you didn't mind..

[SuzyQ1994]

no lol it's fine oh i drew another one and i'm gonna do the lineart tonight and put it on here hopfully tonight and then see what you guys think.

[SuzyQ1994]

ok if u look at the first page i did another

[Cowgirls Rule]

that looks better.

[SuzyQ1994]

[Cowgirls Rule]

no problem.

[SuzyQ1994]

[milon]

You still want me to redline?

Sorry I haven't gotten to it, I kind of forgot about it.. :slapmywrists:

I don't know why, I can't draw cats to save my life >.<

[SuzyQ1994]

haha it's ok if you whant to redline it you can but you don't have to if you don't whant to

[SuzyQ1994]

Still looking for opinions and stuff